Wedding Video help

I recorded a wedding last month and I just need to know if i'm doing ok so far I'm not finished yet with the project I just want to know should I add or delete or rearrange anything can anybody give me any tips or ideas. I posted a sample here-http://youtu.be/9k3nEpayGbQ
Theres a pause at the end of this sample only because its not finished
I still have to add the wedding and reception. I want to use a very good dvd authoring software but that will be later after the project is finished

Hey man. It looks goo so far. Two things I would recommend after first glance. First thing, the first two ladies talking have too much room above their heads. Keeping balanced head room is visually important. This is easily fixed by cropping or adjusting the size of the clip. Second thing is the volume levels. The music seems to be louder than the interviews. I had to turn up my speakers a little after the music. Just some feedback. It looks good man! Keep it up

Your talking about the music in the beginning before the interviews or at the beginning of the interviews? Because I know theres some noise in the background on some of the interviews that I couldn't get out and the cropping i will defiantly fix that.
Thanks Man I appreciate your feed back I will make those adjustments

yeah the music in the beginning is louder than the interviews. Just be sure to keep all the audio the same level as well as the head room and you'll be good. Shoot me the link when it's finished I would like to see the end result. Happy editing