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hey guys..another mx vid i did

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27 Mar 2014 08:31 #43538 by Endoh935

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12 Apr 2014 01:23 #44400 by Sirkoch
Great job man! Love the beginning and the voice overs !

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15 Apr 2014 07:16 #44530 by Endoh935
thank you

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  • To the Virgins, to Make Much of Time Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, Old Time is still a-flying: And this same flower that smiles to-day To-morrow will be dying. The glorious lamp of heaven, the sun, The higher he's a-getting, The sooner will hi
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21 Apr 2014 03:23 #44831 by Deano
Some nice stuff in there...liked the split screen shots particularly.

However - there are a few common issues I see in edits that I think you could do well to note:

Your Font choice for text is a bit thin and the word selection could have been a bit neater.

Golden rule: if you show b-roll vision of people, avoid showing their lips moving - its frustrating to the viewer because sub-consciously they are wondering what they are talking about.

Be careful speeding up human movement... make sure its natural and makes sense.

If you are going to use Voice Over grabs...you should show them talking to the camera at some stage. This video lacks intimacy because we never actually get to 'see' who is talking....

That said... some nice creative touches in there.

Dean...

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