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Very watchable & engaging. Actually, what you achieved with the effects is quite impressive considering you weren't using FX programs per say. I particularly enjoyed the flying scenes & the landing was excellent. There were a couple minuscule concerns for me. First, the labyrinth they're building is going to be hedges when full grown? That's the impression I received, yet when our star is walking the maze we see the lines on the ground (seeds?) are so narrow, they barely accommodate her now, let alone when they have become hedges. If I've misunderstood this aspect please forgive me. The other component for me which was a tiny negative, was somewhere in the middle when we were focussing on the old B&W photos, it felt like it was dragging a bit. I'm glad those eventually came to life, though the old timey scene didn't look convincing enough for me. It appeared like a modern scene in sepia with some scratches thrown on top. A little more time in post on that particular scene (maybe experiment with contrast, bring the lighting down, more vignette & flicker) would have sold it better. Other than that, an enjoyable piece with some nice touches, the faces of folks looking up from their gardening as she flew by, seemed very natural. In general some of your color treatment seemed a titch heavy handed on the vibrance or saturation, I'd kick that down half a notch. Everything else, structure, pacing, concept, it all worked for me.

Thanks for sharing, Jonny.

BTW - Your opening production company bumper is beautiful.